First Screening Feedback

Asked class for feedback after we showed them our first edit.. This is the feedback we gained:

Good Bits-
Creative use of the fish eye lens.

Good lighting, effective.

Lip syncing is spot on 

Comedy Aspects work well

Camera Angles were good/ good range

Bad bits (areas to improve) -

Add more footage, improve editing.

Extend the narrative side of the video.

A wider range of shots on band needs to be used.

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